Hi Noah, this is excellent. I love the grass as a bright background. The first square is great, showing the bird and the bee. (Or is it a wasp?) By the way, there is a little typo because I think you mean "will pollinate" don't you? Great work on the capital letter and the commas too. You missed an "s" off the word starts but that's a quick fix! Then beautiful flowers again. When I next visit, I think we should plant some lovely flowers that the bees will like. You're really good at planting and growing now! See you soon, Aunty Karen xx
Hi Noah, this is excellent. I love the grass as a bright background. The first square is great, showing the bird and the bee. (Or is it a wasp?) By the way, there is a little typo because I think you mean "will pollinate" don't you? Great work on the capital letter and the commas too. You missed an "s" off the word starts but that's a quick fix! Then beautiful flowers again. When I next visit, I think we should plant some lovely flowers that the bees will like. You're really good at planting and growing now! See you soon, Aunty Karen xx
ReplyDeleteHey Noah, guess what? I missed and "s" off the word letters too! :)
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