This is an excellent presentation Noah with lots of information as well as some smashing pictures of the planes. Remember that some words need capital letters, like names of planes and months and countries: Messerschmitt, American, Japanese, August etc. Also the difference between there and their (the last one is when it's about possession and ownership - his, hers, theirs). Just a few points... Nonetheless a superb presentation. You really know your planes and your narrative makes me think about how scary it would have been for those soldiers on the ground and the pilots fighting back. Their heroism is undeniable! Great job Noah. Aunty xx
Hey Noah,It's Brennan Here from your class. I love the way you explained all The details of the planes. Maybe next time you could add the place the planes were built and what country that they represented. Good job Brennan.
This is an excellent presentation Noah with lots of information as well as some smashing pictures of the planes. Remember that some words need capital letters, like names of planes and months and countries: Messerschmitt, American, Japanese, August etc. Also the difference between there and their (the last one is when it's about possession and ownership - his, hers, theirs). Just a few points... Nonetheless a superb presentation. You really know your planes and your narrative makes me think about how scary it would have been for those soldiers on the ground and the pilots fighting back. Their heroism is undeniable! Great job Noah. Aunty xx
ReplyDeleteHey Noah,It's Brennan Here from your class. I love the way you explained all The details of the planes. Maybe next time you could add the place the planes were built and what country that they represented. Good job Brennan.
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