This is an excellent presentation Noah with lots of information as well as some smashing pictures of the planes. Remember that some words need capital letters, like names of planes and months and countries: Messerschmitt, American, Japanese, August etc. Also the difference between there and their (the last one is when it's about possession and ownership - his, hers, theirs). Just a few points... Nonetheless a superb presentation. You really know your planes and your narrative makes me think about how scary it would have been for those soldiers on the ground and the pilots fighting back. Their heroism is undeniable! Great job Noah. Aunty xx
This is an excellent presentation Noah with lots of information as well as some smashing pictures of the planes. Remember that some words need capital letters, like names of planes and months and countries: Messerschmitt, American, Japanese, August etc. Also the difference between there and their (the last one is when it's about possession and ownership - his, hers, theirs). Just a few points... Nonetheless a superb presentation. You really know your planes and your narrative makes me think about how scary it would have been for those soldiers on the ground and the pilots fighting back. Their heroism is undeniable! Great job Noah. Aunty xx
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