Love being safe and sound Oh how I miss fun and freedom Can't wait to be in Greymouth again Knowing the Johnsons are there Do hope we don't have to wait long Or else it will be such a pain Wish I had appreciated more Not being in lockdown!
Love being safe and sound Oh how I miss fun and freedom Can't wait to be in Greymouth town Knowing the Johnsons are there Do hope we don't have to wait long Or else it will be such a pain Wish I had appreciated more Not being in lockdown!
Kia ora Noah, Your poems capture the feelings of lockdown effectively. I enjoyed hearing your voice in both. The Acrostic poem layout is visually appealing. The use of kowhai background with bold print is eye-catching.You are fortunate to have a dog to walk. I am walking too but get a bit bored walking by myself!
Love being safe and sound
ReplyDeleteOh how I miss fun and freedom
Can't wait to be in Greymouth again
Knowing the Johnsons are there
Do hope we don't have to wait long
Or else it will be such a pain
Wish I had appreciated more
Not being in lockdown!
Love being safe and sound
ReplyDeleteOh how I miss fun and freedom
Can't wait to be in Greymouth town
Knowing the Johnsons are there
Do hope we don't have to wait long
Or else it will be such a pain
Wish I had appreciated more
Not being in lockdown!
Hey Noah, I think the second version, changing the end of one line, flows better as a poem... do you agree?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Noah, Your poems capture the feelings of lockdown effectively. I enjoyed hearing your voice in both. The Acrostic poem layout is visually appealing. The use of kowhai background with bold print is eye-catching.You are fortunate to have a dog to walk. I am walking too but get a bit bored walking by myself!
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